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Panos's avatar

Great article but I'd love it if you could go a bit more into "Buildup". I understand instinctively how setup and payoff parts go but I think the article could have been aided with examples or detail in how buildup could be improved or managed in a more productive manner.

Experiential anecdotes of "before" and "after" might have also been nice to have.

Darius Foroux's avatar

Thanks for the feedback. Helpful for a potential follow up piece.

Gaylen Drape's avatar

Very helpful post. I like telling stories, but they don't always come out the way I want. I sometimes get too wrapped up in the minutia and lose the point. Your setup, buildup, payoff technique Is great for keeping the story connected.

Darius Foroux's avatar

Glad to hear that, Gaylen. I think a lot of us can relate to what you said about getting wrapped up in the minutia. I also have that tendency. I still find myself going on for too long. But as long as you are aware of that, you can course correct.

Edward Hammond's avatar

you sound like an experienced speaker or Toastmaster----the old " Opening-Body & Close"

Nice summary of the essentials Ed Hammond

Darius Foroux's avatar

Thanks for reading, Ed. I’ve never done Toastmasters but I’ve heard good things. My inspiration comes from reading and analyzing great stories.

sal montoya's avatar

Thank you great so helpful

Darius Foroux's avatar

Glad to hear that. Thanks for reading.